Saturday, August 22, 2015

My trip to Devanport

One day me and my family we to Davenport for 1 day it was a lot of fun we went on a fairy boat to Davenport and back.When we arrived we got some ice cream and went to a place where there were Navy ships there were so big it was like I was in a movie were some people went WAR! I was surprised that they would have so many Navy ships in one place there was some rides and stuff to when we were going to go back the fairy boat didn't come in time but we had more fun we saw people diving into the water below. They made such big splashes that I nearly got soaked! When the fairy boat arrived we went back home and had a wonderful time.
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2015 at 2:20 PM

    To : Imran

    Nice Post
    Did you have fun in Devanport ?
    What was your favourite thing?

    From:Ash

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2015 at 5:54 PM

    Well done Imran like the way you added verbs

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2015 at 5:55 PM

    Week done Imran like the way that you used great verbs

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2015 at 12:49 PM

    Hi Imran,
    Sounds like you had an interesting time in Devonport. I noticed a few spelling mistakes- can you spot them? Try to use a lot of awesome adjectives to jazz up your writing. Great post Imran, thanks for sharing.
    Ms W

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